 Ghostie
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Date: November 21, 2007 @ 10:04 PM
Oh!!  I do like that  
Nice track Jay! 
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 ShadowMom
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Date: November 21, 2007 @ 11:50 PM
Nice bluesy feel to this, but maybe the bass could be a bit more pronounced in the mix.... it adds depth, but then... that's just my preference. 
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 miraclemaker
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Date: November 22, 2007 @ 5:53 AM
That was very cool had a nice layed
back blues feel - nice guitar
good vocals  would love to hear this tune with some drums 
Good job! 
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 ViciousKitty
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Date: November 22, 2007 @ 8:35 AM
Nice the feel on this track.The guitar tone is awesome,I like the animation on the panning.The vocal doubling is awesome ,the melody grooves hard.The only thing I found I would change and is a matter of taste would be the hats on a split stereo field as oppose to hard panned.Also watch the levels on the guitar as it clips a bit and the vocals pops!Anyway that said this is a real grooving track!
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farfor44
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Date: November 22, 2007 @ 10:16 AM
  Your vocals are very impressive here and of course your guitar work is awesomeThis is
def one of my favorites so far
unpretentious and just damn good!!
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 Mojosnake
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Date: November 22, 2007 @ 10:24 AM
very very nice jay i really like this man  great job man !!!!!!! ohhhhhh love how you repeat the vocal melody on the guitar  play them blues boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
freakin SWEET!!!!!!!!!!! i think buddy would tip his hat to ya son 
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 ChillinBuzz
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Date: November 22, 2007 @ 4:05 PM
the lead guitar is louder than everything else, so i'd lower it and raise the whole song (compression?). dig the bluesy style guitar, nicely laid back tone. 2 minutes is too short though, i'd love to hear a full length rendition of this tune as it's just the thing for a quiet evening drive home. 
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aorpete
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Date: November 24, 2007 @ 5:01 PM
Great track Jay!!!
Chris is right - I to could have listened longer... but I suppose sometimes it is nice to have that feeling 'to crave more' so on that premise you might just keep it as is...
This is by far the best I have heard by you - the lead guitar is fantastic... very expressive!!! 
I hear what Chris is saying about the lead... I would take it down only by a fraction but I'd also bring that bass up a tiny bit in the mix - it's clearly there but a bit more presence could give this even more sparkle!!! 
A real corker of a track here buddy!!!
Is that you on vocals??? sounds real good!!! 
PLAYLISTED & DOWNLOADED!!!
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 NoRentJoseph
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Date: November 24, 2007 @ 5:45 PM
As above But yeah, I like it though. I could listen to this sort of stuff
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Bluenevus
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Date: November 27, 2007 @ 9:26 PM
cool bluesy track..!
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 NosmoKing
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Date: December 1, 2007 @ 5:36 PM
Nice blues track. Would do well to go with the suggestions here regarding the hats panned hard left, and bass / guitar volumes. They will improve the production of an othewise good tune.
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